09
Nov
10

Take Me Slow


       If you want me to melt, if you want me to ache,
                     take
       your        time        to touch me, to know me, to see
                                   me
       like        no        one        else        can. There's no hurry. Go
                                                 slow
       as        slow        can        go,        just let the moment flow.

       There's no trophy, love, for doing me fast.
       I want this to last and last and last and last and last and last and last and last and last.
              Take        me        slow.

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3 Responses to “Take Me Slow”


  1. 2010.11.10 at 12:18 am

    superb, the rhyme, the visual presentation, the sentiment…..RT

  2. 2010.11.10 at 2:46 am

    Excellent how the structure of the poem emphasizes the message of the poem…loved it.


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