20
Nov
10

Somehow Not Right Enough


         Lover: Does tell work against show?
                  Somehow.

            Victim: Which way down sets me straight?
               Not right.

               Patient: Does this pill work as though?
            Enough.

   You don't see me. You hear a cough
   so think things cold. What's rightly yours
   finds fault with what in me's of ours,
      somehow not right enough.

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1 Response to “Somehow Not Right Enough”


  1. 2010.11.20 at 9:30 pm

    Like the way you’ve structured the poem.


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