26
Nov
10

stop \ go

[thanks to one who’ll take no offense – he was right about me running when i shouldn’t, so gently & not in a controlling way asked me to put my notes away for lunch – i’d maybe already started driving him crazy jotting down ‘first draft’ scrap notes – normally i’d do my ‘on the run’ time without the ‘record’ button flipped on like i’ve been doing today & just try to keep it all in my head until i can get back to some paper or a computer – anyway, this first draft for a triolet came from his gentle advice that i take a break]
      
      
-stop \ go-

so, i’ve been asked to stop?
til i’ll be expected to go
get him his, then i’d best hop!
so! i’ve been asked to stop
my own, though. ok i’ll drop
it for now. later, though.
so i’ve been asked to stop
til i’ll be expected to go.
      
      
      
[needs an iron – & it could carry the weight of additional stanzas or even a doubled-over flip]

      

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2 Responses to “stop \ go”


  1. 2010.12.19 at 7:10 am

    Don’t stopy girl; you GO!!!

  2. 2010.12.19 at 7:10 am

    Ya… don’t stopy…. so sloppy of me. ;(


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