See, Love?

                                          - for M
            Is censure not the way love is most true?
                                   Finding fault in you.
                   Is not at times the only move to halt?
                            Is finding fault?
                          In whom do you most get such truth for free?
                     In me.

       One looks away from what's most plain to see.
       You never once accepted all along:
       what I've done right the best is seeing wrong.
              Finding fault in you is finding fault in me.


1 Response to “See, Love?”

  1. 2010.11.28 at 2:41 pm

    Wow…this is packed with so much content and thought provoking words…excellent!

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